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Just a Magic: the Gathering card I made for Twily ^^

The artwork belongs to :iconatryl:, posted with his permission.

edit: just made a few updates, think it looks better now

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*Kei-Waza Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
DO WANT!!! :iconohfuckplz:
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:iconde-ep-th-ou-ght42:
Neeeeeeeeds work.

{+1} Creatures you control gain +1/+1 and hexproof until end of turn.

----- Ability is ok, but the colors it is in are not really the kind that would be giving aggressive, combat type buffs like this. Twi seems to do her best when supporting others instead of on the front lines. Maybe make all spells (or instants or sorceries) you cast until next turn cost (1) or (2) less?

{-3} Search your library for a card (And put it where?). Then shuffle your library. Look at the top 3 cards of your library and put them back in any order.

------- Sooo..... This is six kinds of busted. It's miles better than Diabolic Tutor, in colors that like tutoring more than black. And it leaves your PW around after you use it. Maybe make it a choose one, increase the cost to -4, and put the searched card on top of your library.

{-7} Search target player's library for ten cards and exile them. At the beginning of your next upkeep. you may put 3 of the exiled cards into your hand.


-----Where to start with this one. Well, for one, it's waaaayyy to close to the PW's starting loyalty (which should be more like 3). Needs to be (especally for this kind of effect) at 8 or 9 (assuming lower loyalty). Instead of putting the card into your hand, you could change it to casting them, with or without paying their casting cost. With this change, I'd drop it to one a turn. Pulling 3 of those cards at a time is buuuuusted
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:iconjinxxvonsanguine:
That all does sound like pretty sound advice ^^ I do kinda feel like I made this one abit OP and the effect descriptions are kinda iffy now that I look at it. Then again, tbh I actually made this one awhile back and didn't bother to alter it, lol. I'll definately get to that.
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:iconbobthedoctar:
oh god, that last ability is simply overkill. at least make it require 15 or something..
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~asylum1388 Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well this one isn't ridiculously game-breaking or anything...
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